This article is not well-written, as it lacks many of the necessary components for a reliable piece of writing. The author of this article has failed to include any facts or figures; another quotation from an expert in the field would have been helpful.
People who are overly concerned with the impression they make, or who feel a core aspect of themselves, such as gender or sexuality, is not being expressed, can struggle acutely with their identity. Reflecting on the discrepancy between who one is and who one wants to be can be a powerful catalyst for change. (Identity)
This claim would have been well-supported through the use of facts and figures, or by referencing the work of a psychologist involved in research surrounding identity and self-expression. However, by not making use of these methods, the author has made a claim that is unreliable. Despite having been published in Psychology Today, the article is not fulfilling its purpose of informing readers who are not knowledgeable on the subject, as it is unclear whether the information is even accurate.
Authenticity is also a cornerstone of mental health. It’s correlated with many aspects of psychological well-being, including vitality, self-esteem, and coping skills. Acting in accordance with one's core self—a trait called self-determination—is ranked by some experts as one of three basic psychological needs, along with competence and a sense of relatedness. (Identity)
While the article includes some links to other works, it could be hugely improved through the use of expert opinions. Mentions of “experts” are often made throughout the article, however, the author fails to provide specific examples. The only expert opinion included within the text is that of psychologist Erik Erikson. In conclusion, Identity is not a reliable, or well-written article, and it is not nearly as informative or trustworthy as it should be. Facts, figures, and more expert opinions would have made the author’s argument much more reliable.
Work Cited
“Identity.” Psychology Today, https://www.psychologytoday.com/ca/basics/identity. Accessed 5 February 2024.
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